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Death Invites No Fear

(blank verse) Not long, but clear and strong, came Dad to me. His death was tear-fresh grief most numbing new. Dad's words steered me away from tragedy And gave me proof that death invites no fear. Souls ebb and flow, roll like ocean's own tide. Be death but two clear doors, one souls pass through, And one love-sealed to hold all life earth bound. When flesh life dies, one's spirit life remains On journeys aptly mapped for souls' growth-gain. Each soul endures umpteen human lifetimes 'Til spirit consciousness shines light divine. Now mortal senses hold the universe, When spirit senses would spare us our worst. In race and gender, many are fast wrapped, Yet death shakes gone both sad, human rigged facts. Misplaced emphasis could be what ends us. When spirit sense outweighs human nonsense, We shall seal heavenly wrapped, peaceful traits. November 10, 2017

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Date: 1/12/2018 9:22:00 PM
Love the positive flow, depth and wisdom that are all so well written in this superb gem my friend.... A fav.....
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Date: 12/5/2017 11:26:00 PM
A well written piece of work. Spell binding for sure. Glad I stopped by to read.
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Date: 11/13/2017 12:07:00 AM
..spelling sorry..
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 11/13/2017 5:54:00 AM
Nah, you may regret, but I don't think you ever act in a way that leads to sorry! Does 'hos' mean 'the'?
Date: 11/13/2017 12:06:00 AM
Hos enefgy never left and dwells within you. I remember when you told me. Iambic pentamwter well achieved. You show me the way. Hugs
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 11/13/2017 5:52:00 AM
'Death invites no fear' seems like a ludicrous and just plain stupid title when I think of your environment, Jannie. Truly though, it is mankind that brings the fear, not death. It's too early to think about. I'm not clear on whether my iambic is correct, but my effort was true! Love ya ... CayCay
Date: 11/12/2017 8:54:00 PM
CayCay, your spiritual write is deep and steeped in the comfort that our energy, and the energy of our loved ones, never dies, that we go on to live and learn and love again.. and that loved ones can come to us through dreams and everyday occurrences to comfort us in our time of need. A beautifully expressed write of Heavenly hope and a joy to read my friend. Have you ever read the book 'My Soul's Plan'? Good luck in the contest! Hugs to you!!
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Date: 11/12/2017 7:40:00 PM
So true, dear Caycay. I am happy to see you here already pumping out poems for difficult contests like this one. You have a great way of imparting your messages for humanity as you did with this one. Soupmail for ya
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Date: 11/11/2017 9:32:00 AM
Am I happy to see you back, CayCay, you have wowed me once again with your beautiful and deep words:) p.s. check typos..
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 11/11/2017 11:08:00 AM
Jo - HUG! So happy to be back and to find you here. I am soooo very behind in reading poems, etc., that I'm just trying not to overwhelm myself. I owe you big time. We had not downloaded any intelligent typing program when I wrote this, there was no spell check. Boy, if typos were bullets, it would be a dead poem. Oh, where my mind goes. Thank you again and be to yourself ... CayCay
Date: 11/10/2017 10:04:00 PM
Hello CayCay, so lovely, and comforting!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 11/10/2017 11:16:00 PM
Good to see you, Arthur! Thank you for the kind words. Stay comforted and be well. All the best ... CayCay

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