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So shocking was that news from France, we stared at TVs in a trance; no way to understand. Those young and old without a chance were taken down in wide expanse. Such horror had been planned. Who could have then foreseen the fate upon them cast by those who hate? Just gathered there for fun, not knowing that their deaths await while music played and people ate, their lives were over, done. Who could have thought ahead that they - that enemy that wants its way to change our form of life, would sacrifice their own to say that their belief we must obey? Misguided thoughts run rife. That Paris scene that fretful night prepares us now to face the fight. Define this threat once more that could erupt within our sight. Entire world must join the fight to face this crusade war. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Rime Couee - Tail-Rhymed Verse - For France Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi Judged: 01/03/2016 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Best Sad Poem EVER Sponsor: Laura Loo Judged: 08/29/2016 ============================================= Rime Couee I went with this pattern for Rime Couee as shown on "The Poet's Garret" website x x x x x x x a x x x x x x x a x x x x x b x x x x x x x a x x x x x x x a x x x x x b ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "The November 2015 Paris attacks (sometimes referred to as 11/13) were a series of coordinated terrorist attacks that occurred on Friday 13 November 2015 in Paris, France, and the city's northern suburb, Saint-Denis. Beginning at 21:16 CET, three suicide bombers struck outside the Stade de France in Saint-Denis, during a football match. This was followed by several mass shootings, and a suicide bombing, at cafés and restaurants. Gunmen carried out another mass shooting and took hostages at a concert in the Bataclan theatre, leading to a stand-off with police. The attackers were shot or blew themselves up when police raided the theatre. The attackers killed 130 people, including 89 at the Bataclan theatre. Another 368 people were injured, 80–99 seriously. Seven of the attackers also died, while the authorities continued to search for accomplices. The attacks were the deadliest on France since World War II." Wikipedia

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Date: 9/3/2016 4:52:00 AM
Sandra, you have so eloquently immortalised this sad event where so many innocents lost their lives and were injured. It was heartbreaking to watch it all unfold on our news. Congratulations on your well deserved second placement. : ) 7
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Date: 8/29/2016 10:18:00 AM
Sandra, this was so sad when I heard the news, you described the pain amazingly...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 1/9/2016 2:22:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your awesome win. LINDA
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Date: 1/6/2016 5:27:00 AM
Greetings Sandra. Congrats for the WIN in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Teddy. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/5/2016 2:11:00 PM
An excellent write, Sandra! Your second stanza really stood out to me. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I appreciate your supportive comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/4/2016 10:08:00 AM
Sandra. CONGRATULATIONS on your win. HugS *SKAT*
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/4/2016 6:18:00 AM
A super write, Sandra, and fits the form beautifully. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:55:00 PM
Hi Viv, thank you so much for your visit and nice, supportive comments. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 1/3/2016 7:55:00 PM
I am so glad you got to enjoy this form, thanks so much for the fine work. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:54:00 PM
Thank you for another inspiring contest, Debbie. The subject, of course, was sad and emotional. Thank you for my nice placement too. I wish you a very healthy and happy new year. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/3/2016 1:13:00 PM
I think your work on this subject is outstanding..A big congrats on making something great out of such a terrible subject. BG
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/3/2016 9:19:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Sandra
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Date: 1/4/2016 1:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 12/3/2015 8:25:00 PM
I must look up 'tail rhyme.' Sandra, this is most touching and truly captures the various horrors inflicted on the functional man's heart. I very much like it and read it twice ... CayCay
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Date: 12/4/2015 8:01:00 AM
Hello again, CayCay. Yes, this was a sad poem to write. The actual form Debbie asked us to use is called Rime Couee, and this is one form of the 'Tail Rhyme.' Again, thank you so much for your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/2/2015 7:11:00 AM
Sandra, so beautifully written and such a sad event, you captured the shock and horror well, 7 ~
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Date: 12/2/2015 3:31:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, thank you so much for your supportive comment. I appreciate your visits so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/1/2015 11:32:00 AM
You have a good sense of rhyme and rhythm and regularly find feeling within your word choices. Emile.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/2/2015 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, Emile. Again, I appreciate your visits and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 11/30/2015 3:44:00 PM
Excellent job with that form!! I hope to find time for this one.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/1/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I appreciate your visit and supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/30/2015 10:23:00 AM
lovely Sandra..wonderful as always..:)-lu *smiles*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/1/2015 9:10:00 AM
Hi Laura, thanks for visiting my poem and for your lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra

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