Death Defeating Death


See, the tomb is empty,
      Lord Jesus is alive,
Defeating darkness, death,
      He has risen again ~
We breathe eternal breath;

See, the tomb is empty,
     Christ has resurrected,
In Him, hope is renewed,
     We have forever life ~
Through death, death He subdued;

See the tomb is empty,
     Messiah magnified,
Seated on God’s right hand,
    Evermore in heaven ~
We’ll see him on that strand.



21st April 2022


Theme: Easter

For Andrea Dietrich's "All April in Monchielle" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Indeed we "breathe eternal breath," Jo. What a wonderful vision to behold. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you!
Paul Hempstone Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 11:56 PM
Your use of repetition, rhyme, and imagery create a sense of rhythm and flow that make the poem a joy to read. Congratulations on a job well done!
Watt Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 12:52 PM
Jo, I love the title, the message, everything. "We breathe eternal breath" is scintillating poetry. Wonderful Easter poem, a Fav ~ John
Peck Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 10:14 AM
Very lovely, Jo. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 9:40 AM
"We breathe eternal breath." What a wonderful line Jo! This is a beautiful Easter hymn that highlights Jesus' glorious victory! Love your title. Congratulations and Easter season blessings to you!
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 2:48 PM
Congrats on your name being on Andrea's winners' list. Way to go. Spring is a season of joy because of what He did. Sara
Y. Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 7:57 AM
Hi Jo, Congratulations on well deserved win. It was so apt for the contest theme;-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 6:10 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write in Andrea's contest. Blessings to you
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 2:31 PM
What a beautiful and inspiring poem for Easter, Jo. The title is superb. Congrats in my contest.
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 3:31 AM
A nice job on this one based on faith. Spring always reminds me of the fact that we will live again in heaven and of Jesus' sacrifice of Himself. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 5:53 AM
As St Paul said: Death were is your sting. Beautifully written.
George Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 10:11 PM
"Through death, death He subdued"; Yes, through death, He has defeated death ! What a pleasant paradox ! Let us rejoice, for He has given us eternal life ! A sweet Easter poem---- Jo
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 12:20 PM
Good!
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