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Death, Come Not Silent

Death, come not silent as a ghost in the night Let me hear you in the sound of golden chimes Gifted archangels all pure and white, In gleaming robes of transcendent purity Golden aura surrounding ethereal form, Chanting voices like Gregorian monks of old Floating softly on mists of jasmine perfumes, Their heavenly pauses awaiting the time To raise the royal diadem of awakening, Welcoming the wayfaring stranger home. when I come to Thee with my outstretched arms receive wandering lost soul for I am poor and needy finding my eternal rest
THIRD PLACE WINNER written October 8, 2021 especially for “Let’s Mix It Up” poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France unrhymed 11-syllable couplet, unrhymed 8-line free verse, tanka 5-7-5-7-7

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Date: 11/4/2021 2:47:00 PM
Milt, wonderful write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/4/2021 4:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. I enjoyed the contest.
Date: 11/3/2021 6:51:00 PM
I admire and adore the prayerful beauty of your poem, Milton. Your opening couplet is exquisite in its request before you set the ethereal stage with gleaming imagery for "welcoming the wayfaring stranger home." The heartfelt plea of your Tanka is a grand finale and is especially moving as the vulnerability is truly felt.. A superb piece! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/3/2021 7:39:00 PM
Susan, you honor me so much with your kind, thoughtful, and generous comment on my poem. I truly appreciate it.
Date: 10/11/2021 10:52:00 AM
I really like this poem and especially this rhyme "Let me hear you in the sound of golden chimes" - I feel this way too!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/11/2021 7:06:00 PM
Thank you, Caren. I never did like anything sneaking up on me!

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