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Death By Dawn

The earth gave up its secrets,
you were gone with the morning's dew,
covering all that thirsted for a sip.

The soil turned into a softness,
dark, warm and tightly contained,
a drop of dew's left on your lovely lips.

When the moon shines tonight,
I will walk beneath its light,
determined by my quest.

Lovely are the stems,
clutched beneath my fist,
white lilies for your chest.

A drink is what they crave,
the sun spoils it all,
a tree provides some shade.

I visit you often,
waiting for the day,
when my beds made with a spade.

No one could ever know,
the depth of love that grows,
beneath the darkness of night.

Shadows fall each day,
behind my broken heart,
as I wait for the next moonlight.

In black I cry,
the moon lights my way,
my steps are weary at best.

My tears quench a thirst,
for the lovely lilies I have picked,
to lay upon your chest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kavanagh  Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 2:28 PM
What a poignant write Vickie, some great euphemisms and metaphors, (waiting for the day my beds made with a spade) is bleak but genius, an excellent poem, I enjoyed reading, cheers David
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November 27, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Thank You David, your kind comment made my day. Vickie
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