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Heather’s heartless husband lies on the mortuary slab; his eyes glazed over like a dead salmon. She’d always said he was a cold fish … but he’s stiff - at last! 08/26/20

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John Jones

Date: 8/30/2020 10:26:00 AM

Permanent wry smile at the mo. Nice one.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/30/2020 2:23:00 PM

thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

John Watt

Date: 8/29/2020 11:28:00 AM

Name on the death certificate: Roger Mortis. Great job erecting another master piece, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2020 5:20:00 PM

ha ha ha that is hilarious John:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2020 7:10:00 PM

Hard as that mortuary slab now... lol... Whatever it takes, I guess. Cheers, Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 8/27/2020 7:46:00 PM

ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/27/2020 6:59:00 AM

OMG, ha ha, another great one from you Jan! Hugs :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/27/2020 8:31:00 AM

I couldn't resist that final line lol:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 2:06:00 AM

- ... at last ... rest in peace ... hope you're not getting cold feet :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/27/2020 8:30:00 AM

ha ha ha @cold feet:-) hugs jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/26/2020 5:46:00 PM

This was COLD Jan. I was trying to add the happy face with sunglasses. You will have to visualize it please.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/27/2020 8:30:00 AM

lol thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Gary Radice

Date: 8/26/2020 12:35:00 PM

He sounded very shellfish. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2020 1:12:00 PM

ha ha ha, I think he was a prawn to the cod father lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/26/2020 11:37:00 AM

Thanks for the laugh! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2020 12:24:00 PM

I originally had 4 lines ... but I had to add that final line lol:-) hugs Jan xx