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Beneath midnight’s vexing veil, insidious shadows creep. A tormented mind weaves its tale, where solitude and loneliness weep. A soul surrounded by a storm of woe, death’s relentless call, Lost and all alone, he drifts through labyrinthine halls. The mirror’s ghastly gaze, reflects a loathsome face. Each etched line, scars of time, leaving sorrow’s somber trace. The wistful whispers of self-disdain, their murmurs maliciously clear, Silent screams of eternal pain, a dirge for none to hear. A haunted maze of faded memory, where wonder once dared to tread, Now echo with wails of misery, where hope has long been dead. Loneliness, a phantom’s hand, tightens its cruel clasp, Sanity hangs by a single strand, in darkness’ deviant grasp. Succumbing to the dread of endless night, marked by silent, tearless cries. A soul devoid of hope’s guiding light, seduced by the Devil’s alluring lies. Death beckons like a siren’s call, a promise of sweet relief. Life lingers like a darkened squall, drowning in a sea of endless grief. In midnight’s dark embrace, can a flicker faintly gleam? A softly whispered trace, a bleak question in a dream-- Is there dawn beyond this endless night, a peaceful morning not yet seen? Or does this abyss consume all light, and drown the soul serene? Alas, the shadows close their grasp, as night gives way to day, A final breath, one last gasp, as sorrow slips away. In the stillness of the grave, his struggle finds release, In death’s embrace, a soul so brave, attains eternal peace.

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Date: 8/19/2024 10:05:00 AM
Dear Edward, such an incredibly well written and gripping read. Great skill here creates such an haunting, eerie atmospheric tale. Love the flow and rhyme of the poem. The vivid imagery draws the reader in and the torment screams out! Such an imaginative, creative write poetically penned. The last two lines,’ In death’s embrace, a soul so brave , discovers eternal peace’ is so profound. So enjoyed this enthralling read. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :)
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Date: 7/29/2024 5:28:00 PM
Expertly written though with a dismal end. There can be no eternal peace without conscious thought, but we understand the metaphor. I suppose some prefer the notion of oblivion to suffering. I've known some who have expressed this view. Btw, Beatrix Macabre would love this one. Don't know if you two have bumped into each other yet
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/31/2024 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Tom for your kind words, on a difficult topic. Yes, this ending is controversial. Beatrix and I are familiar with each other, big fan of her work, she is a tremendous talent!!
Date: 7/28/2024 2:09:00 PM
I enjoy this poem. I like how the haunted life rests in a softly gentle forevermore in it's final words. I look forward to this ghost returning in another poem. Any chance for a resurrection? This is a remarkable poem.
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Date: 7/31/2024 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Hilda. I am so pleased you enjoyed this one! No resurrection for this one, I don’t think they would want that. We will let them rest in peace.

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