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Death Be Thy Raven

Death be thy raven's blackened plume And hunched in cape of sordidness A tower's age of wealth's illume Becries a pallid nothingness Where scream escapes an umbral torn Of ravaged souls in weeping due The chill of wakes those come to mourn From air to light the passage through And mists deform the sense's glare Bring void and hollow crushing in Seek flame and sinew cursing there To serve a time and realms begin and judgement done eternal sight in worlds therein to start their flight

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Date: 11/27/2023 4:49:00 PM
Exceptional sonnet, Clive. Bravo!!
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/28/2023 2:20:00 AM
Thank you Daniel, I appreciate you giving your time
Date: 11/27/2023 4:11:00 PM
wow, powerful words here, Clive! Your poem seems surreal, dark and mysterious...I liked these lines: And mists deform the sense's glare. Bring void and hollow crushing in Seek flame and sinew cursing there
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/28/2023 2:19:00 AM
Thanks for your great comment Sara, much appreciated
Date: 11/27/2023 2:59:00 PM
GAAA! Barrymore just went into hiding...
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2023 11:25:00 AM
Yessir, awesome sonnet
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/28/2023 5:42:00 AM
Remedied, sorry Tom, thanks for reading my poetry
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2023 5:18:00 AM
That's because you don't read my poetry. See my piece: The Poe
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/28/2023 3:54:00 AM
Unhelpful, I've no idea what this comment means

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