Death

I imagine sitting in a forest, 
sitting on the ground,
i listen around ,
to all the sound , 
i'm sitting on the ground , 
having a smoke ,
staring down, 
holding my breath.
Ready for death,
taking a second breath,
what do i have left.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ra Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 12:32 AM
Good poem, the feeling is clear, keep writing.
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May 19, 2010 at 10:19 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Kobus. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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May 19, 2010 at 12:14 AM
enjoyed, and have a good one,..p.d.
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