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Death

I imagine sitting in a forest, sitting on the ground, i listen around , to all the sound , i'm sitting on the ground , having a smoke , staring down, holding my breath. Ready for death, taking a second breath, what do i have left.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/21/2010 12:32:00 AM
Good poem, the feeling is clear, keep writing.
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Date: 5/19/2010 10:19:00 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Kobus. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2010 12:14:00 AM
enjoyed, and have a good one,..p.d.
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