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Death Dieing Suffer Heal Not Nothing left Empty emotions Pain fills me Crying Smile at the fact That I'm dieing on the inside I'm falling apart I'm suffering She hates me She wants me gone She wants me dead Soon enough I'll be gone I might be hung Or stabbed Maybe I'll slit my wrists Or overdose on drugs Maybe I'll take a gun to my head But I'll be gone, I'm sure And if she cries I'll laugh It's all her fault She made me this way She made me cry She brought me to take my life If that's not enough My dead body will die I'll haunt her forever To remind her what she's done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/13/2009 8:50:00 AM
Whoa! Powerful and stunning. However, scary. I hope this is creative energy and not your true feelings. Congratulations on your featured write. ~Milt~
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Date: 9/11/2009 9:16:00 PM
Sad and poignant write, congrates on being featured this week :) kind regards Jayne :)
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Date: 9/11/2009 4:49:00 PM
Hi Stacey. Congrats on your feture write this week. Take care....Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/11/2009 9:35:00 AM
Very sad and dark poem, well written. So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/11/2009 5:37:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/9/2009 6:40:00 PM
Stacey - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/9/2009 6:06:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. Congrats on your feature write! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/9/2009 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem well expressed ! Laura
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Date: 9/9/2009 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your sad featured poem. Sara
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Date: 9/8/2009 2:36:00 PM
Stacey, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Stacey. Love, Carol
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