Death - a Mere Dream

awoke I walk thru the steam arisen from the crux of invisibility three weeks mere three weeks that's all that's left i alone told in a dream i'twas more than darkness passing beyond my eye beauty swaying (be)for(e) me me holding {on} i'd never let you die ° honey crisp of apple hung out in sweet disguise do i awaken dare not awaken ripened bits left to bite fortunes bled onto my tongue swallowed with my pride thoughts swirl with a call to battle bruised we all blush the same fortaken not mistaken screams call out your name

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Date: 11/1/2020 11:31:00 AM
Tim your Metaphors are creative and send a compelling message. Nice piece.
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Date: 10/25/2020 5:31:00 PM
Love your poem especially the last line -Screams call out your name.
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Date: 10/30/2020 12:22:00 AM
“To feel envy is human, to savour schadenfreude is devilish.” :);)
Date: 10/25/2020 12:03:00 PM
https://youtu.be/LQKVIJnfiNM
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Date: 10/25/2020 12:07:00 PM
https://youtu.be/xLQwphwP0ys
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Date: 10/25/2020 12:07:00 PM
cc says it all...
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