Dear sweet Vitriol,


 Dear sweet Vitriol,

I could never shut up about you,

Lifting you up when I slipped.

You saw me as naive and a fool,

While you silently took away my sleep.



I came up with so many excuses,

So I could touch you, call you, and see you.

You returned each with blatant refuses 

Always knew how to make me feel like a tool.



When I was depressed, you said the space was my limit.

You bought me a pair of shoes and asked me to stop acting timid.

All the love you showed, I thought I could feel it.

Only to realize what I felt was nothing but deceit.



Last week, I went to our favorite restaurant,

Watching the kids play from the window.

Pleasant memories of you and I played like an echo.

I wish I could erase the moment I asked about your scar.



I won't admit it, but I can't erase you and me.

You gave me my best memories and showed me how to live.

Wish you taught me how to cheat,

How to lie,

All of it.



As I glimpse at the sun, smile at the sea,

The pain of letting go of the best of me, I can feel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 8/3/2024 3:21:00 AM
Emotive and expressive lines penned. Writing about it helps healing to begin. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Date: 8/3/2024 4:05:00 AM
Thank you for reading, I feel lighter now.
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