Dear Son My Only One

D ying without warning those three sad years ago
E ven now I truly can't believe son that you had to go
A lone am I since you and dad both died so many tears I've cried
R eally should have been me son for you were truly far too young

S on I wonder did you get a call to say ‘twas time to go 
O n that sunny Friday morning you were taken without warning
N ow each day my broken heart asks why he called my only son

M any tears we all have shed for now you’re gone for now you’re dead
Y our loving wife and son and daughter leaving them has changed their lives

O nly loving memories left for you my son were called too soon 
N ever did we ever know that on that Friday you would go
L ooking back remembering a truly unreal situation
Y ou had gone our hearts and souls were oh so full of devastation

O n that sunny Friday morning you were taken without warning
N ow the three year anniversary since that fateful sunny day
E ven now how can it be three years ~ our tears don’t go away

Written 22nd September 2022
As three years fast approach the death of my only Son

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Sponsor Sara Kendrick
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 11/6/2022 8:11:00 PM
A reason in itself to write: it helps get through the day. I hope your poem was helpful. I'm so sorry for such a terrible loss. Elizabeth
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Date: 10/17/2022 6:35:00 AM
A heart held in your hands. I weep with you. Congratulations on your win in the contest, Ann.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/23/2022 6:18:00 AM
Dearest Kim, bless you and thank you dear friend. With kindest thoughts and hugs from Annxxxx
Date: 10/16/2022 2:18:00 PM
Ann, oh what a heartbreaking poem, I am so sorry for the loss of your son and your husband, but congratulations on your win in Sara's contest, blessings Constance
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/23/2022 6:22:00 AM
Bless you dear Constance for your kind and caring words, they mean a lot to me. With love and blessings Ann x
Date: 10/16/2022 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on being on the winners' list in my contest. I was excited to see who I had chosen to be on the winners' page myself. Way to go. Sara
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/16/2022 6:16:00 AM
Dear Sara thank you so much for putting me on the winners list in your contest. I appreciate it Sara and thank you. It will be 3 three years on the 19th since my beloved son passed and this anniversary is still very painful... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/23/2022 1:22:00 AM
Hi Ann. I wasn't aware about your son (and husband). I feel your losses and heartbreak through your powerful words. This is truly a very poignant read. Gary
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/24/2022 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Gary for reading my poem and I appreciate your kind visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/22/2022 2:32:00 PM
Can't believe it's been nearly three years Ann, no parent should have to bury their child. And I can feel the pain in your verse but I know he wouldn't want you to be sad. He lives on in your heart and memories. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/24/2022 9:56:00 AM
Bless you Tom and thank you, I know what you say is right, but so hard to actually believe it, as for my son to go before me was truly devastating. I appreciate your kind words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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