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Dear Santa, I Want

Dear Santa, I want to ask you something special Would you try to fix things to how they used to be When mommy and daddy were so much happier It makes me sad and blue when they raise their voices I mostly just stay in my room, out of the way I can’t help but keep thinking they are mad at me I drew you a picture so you can find my house Please find the time to help me, I love you Santa. AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted for contest DEAR SANTA, I WANT sponsored by KEVIN SHAW - December 3, 2017

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Date: 12/5/2017 3:15:00 PM
This is the kind of letter I wish Santa would be able to reply to for all children in this type of circumstance. Very nice and thoughtful poem, LIne.
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Date: 12/5/2017 6:17:00 PM
So true. Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 12/4/2017 2:18:00 AM
Broke my heart this one :(
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Date: 12/4/2017 6:18:00 AM
Ah, Arthur. Virtual hug...
Date: 12/3/2017 11:35:00 PM
Sad n emotional. It's unique. Congrats Lin
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Date: 12/4/2017 6:18:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha.

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