Dear Poet

After the rainstorm I went outside 
and looked into a puddle of rainwater 
that was cuddling the ground 
in front of my house 
and when I saw my reflection 
I became bewildered by my smiling face. 
Suddenly, from somewhere inside my head, 
I imagined I heard a rumbling voice 
from up high in the sky. 
“Become a Puddle Master,” it said.
 “Tell your fellow poets to use their voice 
to help solve the problems 
that plague all you humans who live on the earth.” 
Then the raindrops started again 
and when I looked down at the puddle 
I saw us living together in peace without any wars, 
and I saw us working to end the blight of the poor, 
and saw us stop heating our climate to death. 
So I said out loud to the rumbling voice 
I better go back inside my house 
before my ‘we can do better’ mind set gets wet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/18/2015 7:15:00 AM
Good Job :)
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Howard Dion
Date: 9/20/2015 2:47:00 PM
Edward, thanks for the positive feedback.
Date: 10/2/2014 9:25:00 AM
Danka and Herzel thank you for commenting on this poem. Very much appreciated.
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Date: 10/2/2014 8:59:00 AM
This is a truthful piece. I absolutely loved it...
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Howard Dion
Date: 10/2/2014 9:26:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for the comment.
Date: 10/2/2014 7:28:00 AM
Very original piece. If only we were smart enough and not greedy, we would do better. However, you poem brought a little light, gave hope that there are still people who listen to "that" voice, who care.
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Howard Dion
Date: 10/2/2014 9:27:00 AM
Glad you took time to comment. Thank you.
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