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Anxiety eats away inside wars and suffering never subside there, comfort as I gaze up flood nor fire steal your tranquility clouds erotically dress you bountiful are the dreams resting here Vast is the distance of knowledge why oh moon, I sometimes ask does sword and shield not lie down inevitable death, visits too soon Dear moon, you have inspired many A samurai of peace Very soon shall we send to you wrapped in a canvas of desire seekers all when they returns to be among us visions plenty shall paint and sing let peace begin her waltz Samurai wishes only to sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/26/2018 8:35:00 AM
Moon is a tranquil element for me
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Date: 9/24/2018 1:28:00 PM
The moon inspires in many varied forms; in this case it has done an excellent job, Arthur! Regards // paul
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Date: 9/23/2018 12:14:00 PM
The moon, a beauty in itself to behold and an unveiled mystery for human souls.. The moon remains a dream, heaven, peace.. a source of "comfort" and inspiration as long as Man does not set a stain on it! Only beautiful and knowledgeable souls "seekers" of Truth travel to the infinite space and bring glory to earth and Humanity.. A profound work of art, much to ponder! My deepest regards Arthur. Be blessed always.
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Date: 9/23/2018 9:33:00 AM
This would be a good contender for POTD. Well scribed my friend.
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Date: 9/22/2018 6:12:00 PM
wow, this is so beautiful. It almost looks like it could have been an entry for a recent contest that just got judged and yet I see no congrats, but if it were an entry, I'd surely have given this one a star!!
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Date: 9/21/2018 11:59:00 AM
here's hoping for that waltz to last for eternity Art:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/20/2018 9:01:00 PM
may smiles and hopes find their way into the land of dreams and make them come true, beyond the sweet light the shines from above, give us hope, give us love, good write Art :-D
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Date: 9/20/2018 1:04:00 PM
Wonderful write Arthur, "let peace begin her waltz"...
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Date: 9/20/2018 11:08:00 AM
Excellent my friend. We need more peace
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Date: 9/20/2018 10:16:00 AM
Samurai want to sleep, not wet their swords. Just use it for a whirling dervish dance.
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Date: 9/19/2018 5:20:00 PM
Lovely poetry and pic, my friend! Keep them coming, Art!
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