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Dear Mommy - Our Hardest Days

DEAR MOMMIE – OUR HARDEST DAYS Dear Mommy’, I thought my hardest days were, when I got in trouble and then you knew. I thought my hardest days were struggling in school, but then you saw me thru. I thought our hardest days were, when You fell ill and we felt it too. I know it’s our hardest days If we ever have to lose you. I thought your hardest days, were when you couldn’t give us what you wanted too. I know the hardest part is, that you can’t get up and do what you want to do. Mommy’ I know where ever you went you took us, And I know now where ever we go, we will take you. I know it’s our hardest days if we ever have to lose you. Mommy’, now that you are gone, I am still working on our poem. WE WILL ALWAYS MISS YOU HERE ON EARTH. Mom, you have prepared us for our days of the past Ma, you have prepared us for our days of the present, And Mommy’ you have, and you will continue, to prepare us for our days of the future. I know it’s our hardest days, because we had to lose you. Mommy’ we will always love you forever and ever. Your loving daughter’s, Ethel and Cheryl, and your Loving grandson Chris.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/16/2017 9:28:00 PM
Oh I am sorry, I just reread that last line and I see you lost your mother. I'm very sorry but glad that she was a good role model who prepared you well. Welcome to Soup!!
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Ethel Boyce
Date: 6/29/2017 6:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. That means so much to me!
Date: 6/10/2017 6:38:00 PM
Hi Ethel. It appears that this is your first poem on PS. Good start my friend. Your mom would be proud. Blessings always
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Ethel Boyce
Date: 6/10/2017 11:57:00 PM
Yes it is. Thank you Curtis I'm glad you liked it. Blessings to you always as well!
Date: 6/10/2017 6:35:00 PM
Good heartfelt poem. It appeared your mom prepared you well
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Ethel Boyce
Date: 6/10/2017 11:58:00 PM
Thank you Curtis she was a wonderful woman and she did her best to prepare us!
Date: 6/10/2017 5:27:00 AM
I am so very sorry for your loss. You have written a beautiful poem for her. I hope that posting your poem here gives you some relief. It must be scary too, to post it for so many strangers to read it. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Ethel Boyce
Date: 6/10/2017 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Darren for your kind words. Yes, posting it gives me a great deal of relief, because I get to share my feelings with strangers and read such beautiful poems of others. Thank you for welcoming me. Glad to be here!
Date: 6/10/2017 2:28:00 AM
Very nice
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Ethel Boyce
Date: 6/10/2017 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Street Cries. I appreciate that!

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