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Dear Me

I have something to say to me,
the child within I can still see;
sad that the beginning was bad,
and I have wandered a nomad,
    lost in my mind on this journey;
        where death has stolen the beauty.
Yet, through the grief something was born,
into the soul of a girl forlorn;
    the gift of the pen was given,
        so, I take all that is broken . . . 

All the sorrow and all the pain,
all the hurt that is my vast chain;
and to the child in me - let it go,
surrender-  let it drift and flow.
    To this woman, I am now,
        to me, and right now, I will vow;
that I will live in the moment,
letting go of each sad fragment,
    each dagger into my scarred heart
       the past, the present-  always apart . . .

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October 16, 2017

Rhyme/Dear Me
Copyright Protected, ID 950087

Written for the contest, What Child Is This
sponsor, Craig Cornish

Ninth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 10/25/2017 5:31:00 PM
Very touching and insightful and honest, Constance - gorgeous! Congratulations on your win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 10/18/2017 3:44:00 PM
Hi BW, I found this to sad and positive. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved- Alexis
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Date: 10/18/2017 12:40:00 PM
This is amazing, Broken Wings, deep and emotional , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/18/2017 12:23:00 PM
So tender, gentle and beautiful... so well deserved, your placement.
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Date: 10/17/2017 4:44:00 PM
A lovely poem with an impressive ending, but most of all I love the author's character! It is not easy to build a strong and fruitful life, considering that the early years were hard ones for you. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/16/2017 5:33:00 PM
A beautiful, melancholy and freeing write Broken Wings. 'letting go of each sad fragment' and 'the past, the present- always apart.' - making the choice to free your heart and soul.., to surrender... one of my favorite concepts, wonderfully and poetically expressed so well. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/16/2017 4:41:00 PM
You say it well BW--love the courage depicted in the ending--best for a win!
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