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Dear Lover

Maybe our love would've been better If the circumstances were better If the time was better If we communicated better If the world did not matter If our pasts did not matter Had the walls of our love The walls of our trust Did not shatter And our love .. Our love was our only shelter Our love ooh our love dear lover would've been greater Greater than our fears Our fears to love Our fears to be loved Our fears to trust To give in to love To give in to a feeling so great A feeling so true A feeling so real Oh but lover A feeling some pray to feel Pray to feel from a person Pray to feel in their hearts Maybe oh maybe love Maybe if we had given us a chance Another chance Like we gave us a chance At first glance Smiles after smiles , in a sequence Undying love that made my heart dance For this love I had no defence I fell , we fell , into it And nobody could catch us , no! We were falling so fast We had no choice but to hold each others hands as we fell We fell every hour , every minute , every second of everyday Until , eventually ... Our love ? Broken into pieces Pieces that could not be mended Ended! But love , could we not fight? Or we were just without the strength ..... from falling

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Date: 7/18/2018 3:41:00 AM
Your Love write was Incredible!!
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Fundiswa Mhlanzi
Date: 7/20/2018 2:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Lyric Man , I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it ..
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Fundiswa Mhlanzi
Date: 7/20/2018 2:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Lyric Man , I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it ..

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