Dear Lord, Is She the One?

Many beautiful women in this café
I scan their painted faces, seeking a way

To approach each of them and ask my question
Are you the spark of my husband’s obsession?

Late at night, your perfume wafts from his pillow
I lie awake as my suspicions billow

Are you the reason I’m lying there alone?
He stays out so late now, never even phones

The ebony-haired woman with dark brown eyes
Is she the one behind his excuses, lies?

Or perhaps the redhead’s bright, engaging smile
Has led my man astray with her carefree wiles

A mother of four, my body can’t compare
To those who are blessed with such sensual flair

For more than a decade I satisfied him
But now my mind’s absorbed by prospects so grim

We’re Catholic and divorce is prohibited
But no longer is desire exhibited

By the one who stood by my side every day
Raising our family in God’s intended way

Is she the one, that striking blonde in the corner
Who’s transformed my mate into a foreigner?

Perhaps it’s better if I don’t learn the truth
And forego the tactics of acting a sleuth

I pick up my purse, pay the bill, reach the door
But can’t help looking around the room once more

Before walking across the street to our church
To light a candle, on a wooden pew perch

And pray for answers to these questions inside
Seeking direction from my spiritual Guide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol
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July 9, 2010 at 11:19 AM
This is terrific, Carolyn. Your empathy excels in this one. Too many married men woo their way into other women's lives and/or vice-versa, only to bring heart ache, lost respect, and pain to all involved. No wonder God said, "Thou shalt not commit adultery." He knew we would get hurt really bad if we did...and families would be injured, forever. God bless this message, and you for the wisdom. Love, Dane Ann
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July 1, 2010 at 2:06 PM
this is what a piece this is. i felt it and knew the truth of it, in every line. i wanted to speek to her. but what would i say? the phrase comes to my mind "I gave him the best years of my life...." and they ring out so true here. the fact is life is so unfair. you can be the one that goes to heaven or the one that goes to hell.
Adeite Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 11:18 AM
wonderful piece, wishin you all the best in the contest, thanks for your wonderful comments on my work. with love. Adeleke
George   Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 2:20 AM
Sesational! is the only word todiscribe this poem, Carolyn. A winner for sure. re: A Cup of Bitterness, This poem was written about an 81 year old women who, with tears in her eyes, poured her bitterness of lost love out to me after I read her my poem 'Violin' at a book signing event. Love, Lainie
Fraser Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 2:51 PM
Powerful living piece Carolyn, exceptionally written as only you can do. I am still trawling my innerself to enter this contest. As always I wish you the very very best >> huggles >> James
Freeman Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 10:10 AM
You may be totally right about the dolphin being more spiritual than humans. I think sometimes by His wisdom, that God has place some creatures in earth more intelligent than we, in certain ways, and subject to us, for it is the only way to get us to see from our alienated minds the truth that life has to be based on Love's importance. A little precept in form, if you will, out ahead of our knowledge, like the proverbial carrot to lead the nose. Agape, Moses
Tideswell Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 9:32 AM
Excellent take on the contest, very well written indeed. Good luck in the contest and thanks so much for your kind comments ~ Sharon :)
Freeman Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 9:01 AM
My personal opinion would be, it's the redhead.Smile! And it certainly would be better not to learn the truth. For the truth might be the negative, orrrrrrr it could be a positive. 'Having some fun' I have not been following the news about the oil spill lately. But I assumed there would be distruction of sea life. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 5:40 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Carolyn. Love, Carol
Delacroix Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 9:46 PM
Agonizing situation, very painful. Well done Carolyn. Thank you also for your nice comments on my latest and yes I do know that song. Take care. Love, your friend, Caroline.
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June 24, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Sad write, well done and professional!
Austin Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 2:35 PM
I think, under the circumstances, every exotic woman that comes into view will be suspect. Super write, Carolyn. Love, Dave
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June 24, 2010 at 1:51 PM
HOpe this was not your real situation. As I recall you are single, right? (are you CAtholic, carolyn?) This is an interesting poem. Is it for some contest? btw, I do not regret my earliest childhood memory. I don't think it scared me, it merely fascinated me in a morbid way. maybe it's the reason that today I am so enthralled by Stephen King stories! Luv, Andrea
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June 24, 2010 at 1:22 PM
A topic that many will find that they can relate....This happens so much in the world..Sad though isn't it...My your days and dreams be filled with inspiration..Sara
Neels Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 12:24 PM
One of those that the emotions and questions jump off the page, like you're a part of the write.. And sadly many a female has gone through moments of self doubt. Thanks for sharing Carolyn - love Wilma
Milgate Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 11:41 AM
This is great, like the structure, like everything about it. Hope its not based on real life, but know it can be. Women undermining women. Her turn will come! Is there a contest for this, it's a winner.
Conway Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 11:09 AM
I never even thought about writing from this point of view-Amazing!~Tirzah~
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June 24, 2010 at 9:41 AM
Wow,this is deep Caroline,these men exist,and these man who are selfish can have the prima donna yet still search for new,these dedicated family women exist too,and this is a sad truth,this can happen to men too,but thank God there are still sme women called ladies,and sme men called gentlemen,I love it when you write of such topics,great wrk dear!Cuchi!
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June 24, 2010 at 9:33 AM
Wow! Powerful, compelling write, Carolyn. You took this theme to place I did not imagine - being a man, I guess the words meant different things to me. I was mesmerized and felt her pain. Men can be such pigs!!!!! Terrific, touching poem. Good job. Joe
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