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Dear Little Tear

Dear little tear, I feel the tickle as you trickle down my cheek. I am wishing you safe journey to the stream of tears you seek. Find the river where tears gather on their journey to the sea, taking all our fears and troubles as you’re doing now for me. May you join soon with the others, each of whom has played the role a healing wash for sorrow or a soother of a soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/18/2012 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on you win in Brian's "Contest # 189" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2012 7:52:00 PM
congrats on your win Joyce
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Date: 7/17/2012 4:28:00 PM
congrats Joyce on HM for this lovely write.. tender words .. hope all is wwll.. I am recovering slowly from my concussion..luv.. hi to Carolyn..
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Date: 7/17/2012 12:31:00 PM
Wonderful poem... Congratulations on yor HM... Terry
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Date: 7/17/2012 12:26:00 PM
Joyce, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 4/26/2011 4:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Joyce. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this very creative work..Sara
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Date: 4/22/2011 2:20:00 PM
Lovely small precise tribute to the salt of the earth from a salt of the earth ;) Congrad's on your win! Ligfht & Love
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:51:00 AM
Great to see you near the top of the winner's list, Joyce. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:46:00 AM
A write so tender Joyce, congratulations on your win in the contest, love Wilma
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Date: 4/22/2011 10:37:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your well deserved 2nd place win.Wonderful poem--kashinath
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Date: 4/22/2011 10:36:00 AM
This is beautiful...luv Shani
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Date: 4/22/2011 7:23:00 AM
What a tender hearted poem, dear Joyce! Congratulations on your well deserved win!!
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Date: 4/22/2011 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on this eye-leaking write! Personification is something you do exceptionally well! Enjoying your amazing work this Easter Day! Gwendolen
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:39:00 AM
Many congratulations and a very happy Easter to you : )
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:17:00 AM
Congraulations on the second place win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:15:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your big win in HG's contest on tears.. this piece is touching and moving my friend and feeling for u with luv.. deep expressive piece..enjoy your top spot with luv...
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:32:00 PM
I love how you focused on just one tear as the contest specified, JOyce. Congratulations and I hope you are still with your brother? God bless you.
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Date: 4/21/2011 10:06:00 PM
Let me wipe that little tear and congratulate you on your big win. Just beautiful and elegant poem, dear Joyce. Love it! Iolanda
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:49:00 PM
So lovely this journey of this tear. Many congrats, Have a blessed EAster.
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:08:00 PM
Dear " MOM " Thank-YOU for Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on YOUR 2nd Place Win LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR ( "SON" )...Harry
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Date: 4/2/2011 8:53:00 AM
Beautiful poem Joyce. There's a lovely delight to it, with it's sad touch also. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 4/2/2011 8:43:00 AM
why does this poem grab me? i like the ideal of the tear joining the other tears. john
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Date: 4/2/2011 5:35:00 AM
Joyce this is a tremendous write and a wonderful entry for the contest.. the tear has much personality in this piece and comes alive to trek it's journey .. luv the last four lines so inspiring my friend.. good luck in the contest.. believe u need to put your name on poem luv.
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Date: 4/1/2011 4:15:00 AM
Magnificent Joyce. I wish you the best in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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