Dear John

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In honor of World Poetry Day.  A free verse peice from my new book of poetry, 

Moths and Machetes

Dear John letter

But it’s not. His name happens to be John.
Rather a letter of a hopeful heart anticipating the future

Have I finally found the one man who will be my intimate other? He who will, at the end, sit by a fire with me, sipping tea, our blankets tucked around our tired old knees?

Chortling together about days gone by, how we met, the walks, the talks, the quiet moments without words.

The day I pushed you into the fish pond, the smell of crushed summer grasses under us mingling with our scent of passion.

Will I? Could I? Be your one to the end? Will it hurt very much if you are only a seven year itch…or a seven month or seven day man? Oh, I hope you are a 70 year man!

I love your sternness seen so seldom but still there.  I fear your irrevocable nature, when you are done with a thing or person you are done!

		What wall?
		What ice house?
You mean these few old bricks scattered about on the ground that John Prine writes about? 

‘My heart's in the ice house come hill or come valley
Like a long ago Sunday when I walked through the alley….’

Once you said I had rescued your heart from the ice house,
I asked, what do you mean?
I lived to know how cold your heart could be.

I love you, I tremble for the moment I will know you…my toes are singing,

You are my heart, I am yours always...

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/18/2019 12:20:00 AM
Trisha, I really enjoyed stepping behind your eyes for a brief eclipse with your heart! Wondrous writing!
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Trisha Sugarek
Date: 4/18/2019 5:40:00 AM
Wow! Such praise for my honesty. I am humbled. Would you consider cut/paste this in the 'write a review' for my book/s of poetry on Amazon? Here's the link: https://www.amazon.com/Moths-Machetes-Poetry-other-Musings/dp/1543011977/ref=sr_1_fkmrnull_1?keywords=poetry%2C+sugarek&qid=1555583801&s=gateway&sr=8-1-fkmrnull My poetry is buried and not found very often on Amazon. Regardless, I send my love and appreciation for you.
Date: 4/17/2019 3:08:00 PM
Trisha,this poem spoke to my heart. Very raw with emotions and beautifully written, Keep that fire burning,it will light up the pathway for your John.
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Trisha Sugarek
Date: 4/18/2019 5:42:00 AM
Chinwe, Such praise for my honesty. I am humbled. Would you consider cut/paste this in the 'write a review' for my book/s of poetry on Amazon? Here's the link: https://www.amazon.com/Moths-Machetes-Poetry-other-Musings/dp/1543011977/ref=sr_1_fkmrnull_1?keywords=poetry%2C+sugarek&qid=1555583801&s=gateway&sr=8-1-fkmrnull My poetry is buried and not found very often on Amazon. Regardless, I send my love and appreciation for you.
Date: 3/21/2017 12:26:00 PM
I wish I were to receive a dear Jane letter of that 'magnitude'! I thought it wouldn't be about farewell . . . but maybe it is; farewell to the icehouse as a hiding place John, Trisha's removed the door. A loving 7:) Amitiés
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Trisha Sugarek
Date: 3/21/2017 12:57:00 PM
Your comment brought tears to my eyes. It took him 30 years to re-build the door. Thank you for reading and writing. xxoo
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