Dear God, Please Help Mommy

The little girl got on her knees and started praying 
Said “dear Lord, please help mommy if you will 
She’s putting needles in her arm once more I’m afraid  
And she’s looking tired and I know she’s feeling ill 
She used to take us to church when I was younger 
But since my older brother past away, we never go 
And I know you hear her cursing you, but please forgive her 
Cause since Buddy left it seems drugs are now her ammo 
Please don’t let her pass over to the other side 
Cause then I’ll become a child of the ward 
And although mommy treats me mean sometimes 
I can still remember when I was adored 
Mommy ain’t that bad God, she’s just confused 
Cause no one can tell her why my brother died 
But she at least has me if she’ll come to her senses 
And again we can walk together side by side 
I swept the floor for mommy just this morning 
But she didn’t notice, but God really I don’t mind 
Please, if you’re not too busy with bigger problems 
Could you comfort her inside her mixed up mind 
It hurts when my classmates talk about their home life 
With their mommy and daddy tucking them into bed 
I know you know that daddy left a few years ago 
Another woman is what my mommy said 
I know you have other things that need your attention 
But thanks for lending me your kind ear 
And thank you from the bottom of my heart 
For seeing me through another rough year
I’m signing off and hope I wasn’t much trouble
I want to thank you for another sunny day 
And thank you for taking time to comfort me once more  
Reckon now I’ll go outside and pretend to play
“Amen.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Karry Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Thanks Jan, I just started writing and presto there it was.Your comment means a whole lot to me. Thanks.
Allison Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 3:13 PM
Oh waht an incredibly emotionally charged poem brought tears to my eyes ; Happy reading and writing Jan x
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