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Dear Dr Freud

Dear Dr. Freud, what can I truly say? You know my ego does get in the way a heavy block of much love for the self freezing up the chance for someone else. I know that deep down in me is an Id that’s stored away and properly is hid. Trespassing not within forbidden zones I dare to breech my bottom all alone. I must admit I’m satisfied with me a total, inner, self-complacency and even at my age I still adore the image in the mirror that’s before. I live my life in quest of Godly good treating others as I know I should. For we get in return what we send out. Karmic rhythms often turnabout. Dear Dr. Freud, I can truly say, I am in grateful reverence each day, for all that keeps me going and is true as daily, loving grace of God imbues. 8/27/17 1/24/23 YOUR SELECTION' Poetry Contest Brian Strand, Sponsor

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Date: 9/18/2017 11:39:00 PM
Congratulations, Janis. Quite analytic and flowing poem.
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Date: 9/18/2017 8:32:00 PM
Cool one! Congrats, Janis!
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Date: 9/18/2017 4:09:00 PM
Janice, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this fine poem
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Janis Thompson
Date: 9/18/2017 8:10:00 PM
Thanks Broken Wings. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 9/18/2017 10:51:00 AM
This is a wonderful write in every way, Janis, and I also loved the post script, (though I judged it on the poem alone) ... so expertly-penned and thoughtfully creative! Thank you for entering my contest! :-)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 9/18/2017 8:12:00 PM
Thanks so much for your placement of my poem in the contest. I am honored.
Date: 8/29/2017 7:31:00 PM
Third level poetry this is, Janis. Ticket to nirvana on an elevated consciousness. Love the phrases and the insightful messages. You got it going on strong. Regal poetry from the pen of a princess. Love and joy always.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/30/2017 8:14:00 PM
Thanks Freddie.
Date: 8/29/2017 12:52:00 AM
The last stanza sums it all up the best, well written, Janis:)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/30/2017 8:15:00 PM
Thanks, Jo.

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