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Dear Bad Habit

Time has come to end this life, Of having you here by my side. My whole world turned just for you. So now, I'm letting you go... Don't think I never valued our time together. It's just that we're not meant for each other. Let us now close the final curtain. Move our feet away from thorough pain. Remember goodbye, it doesn't mean forever. I can breathe now, glad it's over. #made for Linda's Poetry Contest # I'm breaking up with you

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 10/3/2021 6:15:00 AM

Wow, definitely not in the tone of the last poem i read. This is definitely more powerful in the sense of you taking control. I don't know I need to stop analyzing so much, nice work.

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/12/2016 12:26:00 AM

A wonderfully penned verse that is a firm goodbye written with clarity that is not belittling to the other, but refreshingly factual. Great writing, a pleasure to read. blessings, lynn

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/12/2014 11:12:00 AM

Great poem. In other words - turn out the lights - the party is over. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2014 11:17:00 PM

an awesome break up poem. DANG, isn't it on the list. Looking down here and I don't see any 'grats!!!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 6/24/2014 3:49:00 PM

No Andie...too bad.. I was not allowed to enter it in the contest due to some blocked site on my pc at work... Thanks anyways for commenting.. I'm glad that you appreciate it!! :O))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2014 4:40:00 AM

- A wise decision ..... but not easy - Very well written dear friend, Aiyah - Good luck in the contest - Have a great Wednesday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)