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Dear-Slayer

The words, they echoed in his ear He forced a smile, and downed a beer "We're finished, darling dear," she'd said Her voice, the knife that left him dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/17/2021 6:41:00 PM
Words slay us faster than almost any other weapon.
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Date: 2/17/2021 12:54:00 PM
Concise and powerful, Gershon! Janice
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/17/2021 6:02:00 PM
Tense and terse. ~ C. Coolidge
Date: 2/17/2021 10:51:00 AM
Wow! You really slashed this one! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/17/2021 5:58:00 PM
I've graduated (finally) from 'tire-slashing.' lol. Thanks, Rico
Date: 2/17/2021 8:13:00 AM
Heartless woman! Sad for the poor guy. Linda
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Date: 2/17/2021 5:57:00 PM
Sure seems like she's heartless, alright. Though it takes two to tango, they say. :) gw
Date: 2/17/2021 4:15:00 AM
Sad, emotive write. Men too have emotions. Take care Rama
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Date: 2/16/2021 7:40:00 PM
Very sad!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/16/2021 7:45:00 PM
Yes, abolutely sad. (Guys have feelings too, at least once or twice in a lifetime. lol). ~ Back to the Man-Cave

Book: Shattered Sighs