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Dealing With Storms

Dealing With Storms The lightning outside is Far away and harmless Like fireworks in the night I safely watch from home And chuckle with delight The lightning outside is Moving ever closer I sense malignance now Lurking behind thunder Sweat breaks upon my brow The lightning outside is Inside my city’s walls Flashes bright and blinding No longer firecrackers It’s jarring and grinding The lightning outside is Just outside my front porch Challenging to ignore It rocks my foundation So, I opened the door

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Date: 3/1/2024 9:03:00 AM
I love literal storms. This storms we face in daily life, however, well, they are a challenge to be dealt with Robert. Congratulations! :)
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 3/1/2024 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Linda!
Date: 3/1/2024 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations Robert! Your descriptive poem "Dealing With Storms", has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem easily earned you a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 3/1/2024 9:30:00 AM
Thank you sincerely Emile.
Date: 2/25/2024 5:24:00 PM
Oooh it keeps building and building. Why open the door? For acceptance?
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/26/2024 9:36:00 AM
Thanks for asking! Could be different for everyone. But for me, the storms were problems we see in the world or even our personal flaws. At first, they might seem harmless, even entertaining. But, they don’t go away. They just get bigger until we take them in or accept them as our own.
Date: 2/14/2024 12:49:00 PM
So you opened the door to let the thunder in. You are brave. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page with congrats. Sara K
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/15/2024 10:07:00 AM
Thank YOU Sara! You are much appreciated.
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/15/2024 10:06:00 AM
Thank YOU Sara! You are much appreciated.
Date: 1/26/2024 1:45:00 PM
The imagery is quite vivid in this one..
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 1/27/2024 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 1/25/2024 12:35:00 PM
Wonderful description of, and metaphor for, an impending storm. Love the twist in the last line! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/25/2024 7:20:00 PM
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 1/25/2024 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, much appreciated. I just joined and am absolutely amazed at the incredible talent on this site.

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