Anna Hopper Poet Rhyme

Deadly Sins

Shattered, busted
Broken pieces
Sinner, lusted
Crisco creases

White noise
High pitched screams
Girly boys
Wet dreams

Blood red stains
Off white gown
Pistol rings
Chalk on ground

Lethal needles
Veins blown
Better feels
Than being stoned

Strip club love
STDs
Ketamine rub 
Nose bleeds

Masked face
Girl at gunpoint
Steps retraced
Blow this joint

Hep C
Painted skin
Deadly
Seven sins

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Ronald A. Williams August 16, 2017 at 7:40 PM All sins are deadly my sister. We indeed have to overcome.

Michael Bell August 10, 2017 at 3:46 AM Great writing Anne - well done

Russell Sivey August 9, 2017 at 6:13 AM Wow, what a terrific write my friend! You have portrayed several deadly sins in one beautifully crafted poem! And they are awfully terrible these sins...but can be forgiven! What a glorious piece Anna, Fantastic, Great Work!!

Old Man Emu August 9, 2017 at 1:24 AM Good work, made me feel kind of unwell. So you portrayed the sins in all of their disdainful glory. Kind regards, Craig

Pat Adams August 8, 2017 at 3:17 PM Another keeper. Great rhyme and a really interesting abstract way of painting a verbal picture. Well done!!! 80]

Heidi Sands August 8, 2017 at 11:10 AM This really portrays it well Anna ! :)

Maurice Rigoler August 8, 2017 at 11:09 AM Hey, I'm happy to tell you I've managed to escape all of these deadly sins except one: being born. Thanks for reading my Morning Toad. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M

Nette Onclaud August 8, 2017 at 11:00 AM i like the vignette-like images of your piece, anna... short, vivid words that highlight man's deadly scenes.. huggs Anna Hopper August 8, 2017 at 11:13 AM Thank you