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Deadly Quiver

It seems everyone is bent on stinking up the house so here I go Do you warn people ahead of time? Can it be deadly? Is it because you ate too many beans? Can it come with loose stool? Uggh I don’t want to talk about it Gross gross gross Do men do it more than women? Ahh would you be caught dead doing it? Would you survive the attack? Come - you can tell me Would you be the silent type or the wild letting all loose party crasher? When was the last time you gave a lasting impression? Are you sure you want to be known that way? Lol Too stinky in here

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Date: 7/2/2014 2:01:00 AM
One of the kids I worked with would always say 'better in than out miss' and then let rip. thanks for joining in the farty fun. jan x
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 7/2/2014 2:41:00 AM
Lol, my pleasure!
Date: 7/1/2014 10:39:00 PM
we have a funny saying in Jamaica,,,Let fart be free,,,It almost kill Mary Lee,,,lol,funny write Toquyen
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 7/2/2014 12:06:00 AM
Lol, thanks, Richard. Yeah, let it be free haha
Date: 7/1/2014 8:23:00 PM
Silent but deadly...lol
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 7/1/2014 8:24:00 PM
Haha, kill on impact, huh?
Date: 7/1/2014 7:46:00 PM
Hi Toquyen, Nice poem. Not in the fragrance sense. Not too many poets would touch on the subject of the fart. As poets we must be free to tackle every subject. In the old days, the ladies of aristocracy would say, "I have the vapors." A gentleman or gentle woman would and should go outside or at least leave the room to expel gas. That applies today. You did a good job of provoking thought. Keep up the good work. Have a nice day. Take care. Earl
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 7/1/2014 7:57:00 PM
Thanks, Earl. I am glad you enjoy it. I thought it was a funny subject, haha

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