Deadly Pattern

He realised his big mistake:
to touch the pattern on the snake...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Drowley Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations on your win! I felt that!
DiMino Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 8:24 AM
Wow! Ouch! Congratulations.
Gibson Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations; I enjoyed your short poem with the powerful punch.
Andresen Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 10:42 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest , Jack :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 4:49 AM
I wanted to say thank you for participating in my contest. I enjoyed reading your winning work, way to go. Sara K.
Sultan Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 1:32 AM
Congratulations short and beautiful.
Daniel Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 9:21 PM
Clever and deadly, Jack, congratulations:)
Croft Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 7:37 PM
Congratulations!!
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 4:10 PM
Congratulations on your top win!
Anaya Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 3:19 PM
Funny in a way, love it. Congratulations on your top win! Blessings
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