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Deadly Kiss

I hungered for his kiss My lips leaned forward, into his Then passion exploded everywhere He gripped my hips, I gripped his hair Body to body, we became entwined Flames raged from his mouth to mine Desire for more consumed our thoughts Till grips of steel pulled me off - “WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” My husband raged I staggered back, red flooding my face “WE’RE OVER” he said. 10 seconds of bliss, The death of our relationship 8/9/12 for pd's "kissing game" contest

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Date: 10/28/2012 8:56:00 AM
Wow, this is a fantastic poem. Goodluck in the contest Susan.
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Date: 10/18/2012 2:39:00 PM
Passion flowed... then a twist of fate... great poem... Terry
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Date: 10/15/2012 12:13:00 PM
Sad - all too common tale! What did you mean about the double meaning of the last line of my poem? Peace and Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/10/2012 3:45:00 PM
back to this one I liked so much. Yes, back to the drawing board with you. I hope I can get there at ALL this week!! Luv , andrea
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Date: 10/2/2012 2:52:00 PM
Hot, dangerous, exceptional, nightmarish - perhaps better than a 'slow death' - J.A.B. %
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Date: 9/14/2012 12:09:00 PM
oh man! really deadly! cool write!!!!
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Date: 8/29/2012 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Kissing Game" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2012 5:57:00 AM
Thanks for my placement in your contest (silence).
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Date: 8/27/2012 9:21:00 PM
hey, susan. please hurry and post some new poems, sweetie. I always look forward to your stuff!
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Date: 8/27/2012 9:27:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your win, Susan! I really love this one. Actually, this is my second time to read your poem. Thank you very much for making me win in your contest, Silence. You gave me more inspiration to write. More power and blessings always. love and hugs, leonora
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Date: 8/26/2012 5:09:00 PM
Oh, I see its a winner, congratulations!!!
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Date: 8/26/2012 5:08:00 PM
This is wonderful, wow such passion, best of luck in PD's contest and thanks so much for my placement in your Silence Contest, I really enjoyed it and I am very proud you liked my poem. Love Constance
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Date: 8/26/2012 4:14:00 PM
Congrats on yor win.
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Date: 8/26/2012 11:58:00 AM
Love this passionate write, Susan. Thanks very much - loved your contest - and many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 8/26/2012 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:34:00 AM
so appreciate my poem being a winner Susan.. so difficult to write these days but will continue till last breath luv.. u r giving us great challenges.. thankxx..
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Date: 8/25/2012 1:46:00 PM
hey, I never stopped to congratulate this one. BIG congrats, Susan on what I am sure was a well deserved place. I gotta check to see where she placed you. yes, that was fun reading what you said on great minds thinking alike. DO a limerick, Susan!! oh, and thanks for my place in your contest. WHAT a great contest you hosted. I want to blog something about it.
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:17:00 AM
Well that was a great surprising ending..Then all the questions begin..Good luck in the contest..Winning material for sure..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..It was fun writing a few just single couplets..Sara
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:17:00 AM
Oh, Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Date: 8/24/2012 10:43:00 AM
Wow Susan....deadly indeed, love the passion and twist at the end. Awesome write! Hugs
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Date: 8/24/2012 8:31:00 AM
congrats on your win Susan
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Date: 8/24/2012 5:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win Susan!!!! :)
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Date: 8/24/2012 5:27:00 AM
A winner ! - I'm not suprised, full of passion, full of energy, very enjoyable poem. well done.
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Date: 8/24/2012 1:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win , love this xx
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Date: 8/23/2012 10:40:00 PM
Good write. Congratulations on winning with it.
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Date: 8/23/2012 10:19:00 PM
This one kiss has it all. Congratulations.
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