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Deadly Embrace

Blood clings to my face, my heart starts to race Couldn't grab my mace, I thought you were my Ace Nothing looked out of place, inside I pace I wore my lace ,you left without a trace You threw a glass vase , I’m in outer space Why the briefcase? And why did we embrace? 4-30-17 Alexis Y.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/1/2017 7:31:00 AM
This is very nicely crafted Alexis The brief case line for some reason made me think of Clark Kent and why didn't he come to the rescue. :)
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Date: 4/30/2017 6:26:00 PM
It's a mystery poem! I think you did well with your monorhyme, Alexis. It's all in PLACE!
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Date: 4/30/2017 5:42:00 PM
Too bad you couldn't grab your mace!...Nicely penned Alexis
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