Dead Winter

The cabin sits against the forest wall
hidden from human site, it stands alone
isolated
in the dead of winter, the cold has a jagged edge
things crunch
twigs snap, upon a sparrow's landing
the freezing wind brushes painfully across the cabin
like an artist, whose hands are brittle with decay
forcing the branches to scrape along the upstairs window
like fingers trying to get inside.
the cabin creeks, showing its age
as it settles in, for a long winter
outside, the wind continues to show its fury
as the cabin's walls whistle eerily, to see whose listening
the clock chimes downstairs

For now....
we are not concerned about the footprints, leading to the back door
they are of no consequence at the moment
but in a few minutes, maybe less
they will be.
the cabin stands alone
hidden, isolated
in the dead of winter
no one can hear you scream
the deadbolt turns....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "DEAD WINTER" contest Kurt. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 2:05 AM
A great win Kurt congratulations x
A   Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 10:43 PM
KURT,, a wonderful win ;-) congratulations, on a poem well done,..always yours truly,..p.d.
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