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Dead Winter

trees outside heavily laden with ice— night rain continues a plump woman shivering, teeth chattering— near the fireplace the door opens and gusts of cold air burst in— the nursing home my grandmother lying in bed starving— no food allowed I watch helplessly while her bony hands squeezed mine— ninety-eight years old after nine days I hear Grandma’s last gurgle— crying and one kiss © December 8, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Dead Winter Sponsored by: Sidney ~ LeeAnn FORM: Haiku Series

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Date: 1/18/2012 1:46:00 PM
A sad sorry..HUGS Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "DEAD WINTER" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:00:00 AM
A great win Dane congratulations x
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Date: 1/15/2012 10:42:00 PM
DANE,, a wonderful win ;-) congratulations, on a poem well done,..always yours truly,..p.d.
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Date: 12/13/2011 10:13:00 AM
Each of them tells its own story. Each was so special to read.
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Date: 12/8/2011 7:13:00 AM
A touching write Dane.Nicely written.Best wishes in the contest.
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