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Dead Man Stalking

Looking for every chance to take a look at her; Longing to feel her embrace As I peek through the 8”x8” Window of her front door, Her four naked legs beckon my company Thoughts of sitting on her lap My arms resting on hers (day dreaming) She's electrifying Longing to feel the embrace of her velvet leather A gaze into the reflections of her steel buckles Anticipating one night of bliss; conversation for two I often volunteer to clean the floor in which she resides For an opportunity to gain a whiff of sweet stench Alas the time has come an opportunity to make her acquaintance The meal I will request? KFC chicken with sweet tea and a piece of peach pie She's all I thought she would be (up all night) At 7:35 am we consummate our relationship I’m number 8730029 #563 on her long list of morning lovers (as daylight breaks) ------------------------------- Lights out------------------------ ----

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/26/2009 8:38:00 AM
Makes me want to get electricuted! he! he! Great poem, Abe. The skillcraft is outstanding and a work to be remembered. Thank you for this. ~<><
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Date: 9/14/2009 1:28:00 PM
I take it this is about Old Sparkey, probably thee famous electric chair, if yes - should be used more often. Electric write>>James
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Date: 9/11/2009 8:50:00 PM
Wow...this is a winner Abe...i love the imagery and how you told this without showing everything..you let the reader use their minds in this piece..love the build up and how you made this death chamber so desirable...the ending is great..I love this..wish I had wrote it...very good piece brother.
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Date: 9/1/2009 6:50:00 AM
wow!!! great write i love the 11-13 lines awsome.
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Date: 8/30/2009 9:56:00 PM
i loved it
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Date: 8/29/2009 12:00:00 PM
what a refreshing way to look at things. throught the mind of a psycho path. go ahead freak your self out. i'm sure that on the morning of your recconing you'll come to your sences and be terrified. lol jhl
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Date: 8/27/2009 7:30:00 PM
Instead of fearing the chair he is fascinated with it, great write I love many of the descriptions, great word play in the ending two lines...Raul
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Date: 8/27/2009 7:16:00 AM
This is darkly eerie..haunting.....yet somehow you made it facinating.......yikes!!! ........ excellent trailer for a movie script!!! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 8/27/2009 7:03:00 AM
Very interesting. I am not sure if you are talking about a car or a drive thru order box or the woman that works there. I guess I'll just have to keep guessing. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/27/2009 5:11:00 AM
You had me thinking with this one Abe. Excellent. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2009 12:06:00 AM
very long list:)it was a pleasure to read this poem.and i loved the detailed descriptions..excellent write--charma
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Date: 8/26/2009 9:57:00 PM
Clever write, Abe! This is charged with double entendre! :o) Hehe...well done, friend! Donna
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