Dead End Street POTD

There are many kinds of writes,
some write wonderful songs.
Their words will make you sing along,
the music will keep running through your head.
Some write poems,
they can make them rhyme.
A poem could tell a happy or sad story,
or make you laugh out loud.
Some write books,
it could be about a dead end street.
The characters find the road has ended,
what a great place to park.
Park under the silver moon,
and count the shining stars.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Labyrinth Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 7:45 PM
Hellelujah to that sister. xx
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. My heart is wearing a very big smile with this POTD wonderful honor. A Big Thanks to Soup/My Readers. Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Nicole Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 4:23 PM
There's so many ways to be expressive, and poetry is certainly one of them. Writing songs, along with books, is another way to share thoughts from the heart. This is beautiful, Paula. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 11:39 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you found my fun "Dead End Street" write to be beautiful. My heart is wearing a very Big Smile for this Wonderful Honor. Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Romios Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 1:59 PM
Hi Paula..what a fabulous poem. It sparkles with originality. Inpriring ending, zowie.congrats, poetess. Pamgie xxxx
Goldsmith Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my fun "Dead End Street" write to be a fabulous poem/It sparkles with originality/Inspiring ending. My heart is wearing a very Big Smile from your kind words. You made my day. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 9:17 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Good to see you back again. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Seeker Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 8:35 PM
Back again with warmest congratulations on POTD, Paula. A beautiful write indeed
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:43 AM
Good to see you back again. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you like my write. Thank You to Soup and to my Readers for this Wonderful POTD honor. My heart is wearing a very big smile for this wonderful honor. I enjoyed bringing it to life. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Schatz Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 8:04 PM
I love the ending: what a great place to park. Park under the silver moon, and count the shining stars. I laughed at what a great place to park, and didn't expect the lovely finish.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:36 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you love the ending to my fun "Dead End Street" write. Also glad my Parking under the silver moon, and count the shining stars made you laugh. That makes me happy. My heart is happy with a big smile for this wonderful honor. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Scott Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 7:10 PM
I love the positivity of this, not every dead end is a brick wall, you are right Paula. I also like to think we can conclude somethings with beauty & mutual satisfaction, even enjoyment. Lovely :)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you love the positivity of my fun "Dead End Street" write. So true, not every dead end street needs to be a brick wall. That is why I parked under the silver moon, and count the shining stars. My heart is wearing a big smile for this wonderful honor. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Roper Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 6:17 PM
Well said Paula. Congratulations on POTD
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you like my write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
One Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 6:10 PM
A wonderful poem and great choice for POTD...
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you found my fun "Dead End Street" write to be wonderful/great choice. My heart is wearing a very Big Smile for this Wonderful Honor. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Edmonds  Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 5:40 PM
A lovely poem Paula, your ‘Dead End Street’ is wonderful and could inspire many a poet’s muse. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Dead End Street" write. A poet’s muse needs to be inspired from time to time. I really enjoyed writing this fun one. I am very honor. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Elliott Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 5:31 PM
Congratulations on a fine POTD, Paula. You have a musical way with your wondrous words. Have a restful evening, and all the best!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. It is a wonderful honor. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Lane Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations to you on your potd, Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Kendrick Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 2:46 PM
Congrats on POTD. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your lines about reaching a dead end whether it be a street, poem, a life or whatever. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Dead End Street" write. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Wolf Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:57 PM
So sweet, so upbeat! Congrats on POTD, Paula! :) Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:07 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you like my fun/upbeat write. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:26 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Paula. I am sorry, I don't know how I missed it! Your poem is truly unique - and I particularly loved the last two lines. Love ~
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:35 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you found my fun "Dead End Street" write to be truly unique. I also love the last two lines. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 12:55 PM
looks like you took the theme and ran with it. This one seems so difficult to me. Hope you get a win for this one. (oh, and wow, it's a POTD) Big congrats
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your Big POTD congratulations. Glad you like my write. I enjoyed bringing it to life. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Hello paula, congrats on your POTD I enjoyed this poem. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Hello Paula, I will pots a poem next week. I enjoyed your poem. Hugs. I will you do the same. /Hugs. /Darlene/
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. I enjoyed writing this one. Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Ball Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 11:51 AM
Congrats on a well deserved POTD Paula. Loved this. God Bless, JB
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:13 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you love my fun "Dead End Street" write. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Anaya Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Not to worry, sweet Paula I would'nvr miss your potd. Congratulations on POTD Paula Goldsmith! Clever ending. Enjoy
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun write with my clever ending. My heart is wearing a very big smile for this wonderful honor. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Buehler Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:08 AM
I'm back with warmest congratulations on POTD, Paula. Blessings and hugs.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Good to see you back again. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. A big thank you to everyone for this POTD win. My day/heart is filled with happiness. Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Poet Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Big Congratulations on your POTD honor, Paula, with this well-crafted poem. Enjoy your day
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. My heart is wearing a very big smile. This is a wonderful honor. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Kaufman Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 7:48 AM
Hi Paula, Congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your honor and have a blessed day.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. Today, my heart is wearing a  big smile. This is a great honor. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Mcintosh Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 7:43 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTD. God bless you, love, Gina
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Good to see you back again. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. A big thanks to everyone for this POTD win. My day/heart is filled with happiness. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Poem of the Day "POTD" 11/8/2023 ~ Thanks to "Soup" and to all of "You" my readers. ~ Dead End Street ~ Date Written:11/7/2023
Turner Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations Paula on your POTD. I love happy endings:)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 7:48 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your POTD congratulations. I also love happy endings. Today, I have a smile on my heart. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
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