Dead Calm

It isn't peace
For in peace
Light dances in delight
With the leaves of trees.

It isn't quiet
For when it is quiet
You can still hear
Everywhere the sound of life.

When you cannot hear
Birds chirping in the trees 
Bees buzzing around lilies
Butterflies fluttering in the fields,
You only hear the sound of your heartbeat
In the absence of ushered feet
The animals betray an alarm
Dead calm.

It is a sign of danger
Foreshadowing murder
The traitor of life
The bearer of strife.

A gunshot is heard
Echoing in the forest
The birds fly away
Ushered feet running away
For the traitor of life
Has no choice but hide
He must live in the dark
Betrayed first by the dead calm.


By CarolineCécile, July 3rd, 2009.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Congrats Caroline on "Dead Calm" being featured. Vince
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March 15, 2011 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Caroline. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol
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March 13, 2011 at 4:55 PM
Congrats Caroline on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful words to share with us all my friend with luv...
Goff Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 9:47 PM
re-visit! so many levels of meaning! you are a talented poet! Caroline!.... love, james marshall goff
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July 3, 2009 at 6:24 PM
The calm before the "storm," be it a hunter or some other type of threat, has always intrigued me. You portray the feelings I associate with this chilling calm very well, Caroline! Best Wishes, Carolyn
Goff Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 2:34 PM
yes! here in the midwest, that moment arrives minutes before a twister rages through!! you notice the stillness and the sickening 'yellow' tint to the sky!!! and then 'duck n' cover'... great verse! Caroline! and thanks for your sweet comments!! jim
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July 3, 2009 at 11:15 AM
I like how you went about this poem Caroline, well written>>James
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