Dc

the last train pulls away all of a sudden i miss everyone

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 11:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Daniel. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/12/2010 3:34:00 AM

Daniel, Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2010 3:22:00 PM

Congratulations, a very nice read!

Date: 5/5/2010 8:12:00 AM

This is a heartfelt piece that almost everyone can relate to. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on placing third in Brian's contest. Enjoy your big honor. Karen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/5/2010 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/5/2010 6:30:00 AM

enjoyed

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/5/2010 6:03:00 AM

Congrats on the win

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/5/2010 6:01:00 AM

Great Monoku..I can see the scene and feel the emotion..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 5:02:00 AM

Congrats Daniel on your winning poem in Brian's contest with this great Monoku.. interesting indeed and a nice win for u to enjoy... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/5/2010 4:59:00 AM

Interesting reality Daniel. Great monoku. Congratulations-Robert

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2010 6:37:00 PM

Good luck in the contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/4/2010 6:37:00 PM

they are looking real good for the contest, good look for the contest, well done,..p.d.