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Dazzling Day

DAZZLING DAY Day dawned on dainty dazzling sun rays. Autumn sky presents torn cotton cloud floating drifting in whimsical craze. Me merrily, boredom not allowed. Your sapphire eyes glisten and glaze. Your divine elegance to astound. On your cheek glow of bright Sun: I gaze. Sprinkled beads of pearls as you laughed loud. Few dewdrops shimmering on roses Tiny blooms on grasses forming crowd. Charisma of fair fairy: I praise. Amazing ambient all around. Shy yet dreamy eyes you are to raise. Look straight without blink making me proud. Reticence, hesitance, distance to chase. Joy of a dazzling day knows no bound. 09/30/19 Edited on 04/26/20 HM 'STRAND PICK F' Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 10/1/2019 11:29:00 AM
Wow a sure winner to me!;)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/1/2019 11:47:00 AM
thanks Brenda.
Date: 9/30/2019 10:04:00 AM
Anisha, Very nice to find this poem today. I like cotton, even better as a cloud. -Richard
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/1/2019 11:47:00 AM
Thank you for visit n appreciation. Blessing

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