Beautiful Scars Poet Ninette

Dazed and Numb

dazed-
c a l l o u s 
and        aloof
from   the    stoic
aftermath   of   your
blazed  avalanche-
your   ice   has
made   me
n u m b- 


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April 20, 2017

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Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2017 at 4:21 PM WELL DONE, Laura. Your theme was a bit like mine for "numb" I enjoyed seeing how you did yours as a ninette. Congrats.

Paul Callus May 6, 2017 at 9:23 AM Congratulations on placing first, Laura! Very poetically expressed emotions. Regards // paul

Anisha Dutta May 5, 2017 at 11:52 PM Big Congrats Laura to win top. Hugs

Eve Roper May 5, 2017 at 4:15 PM Huge impact on your poem Congratulations on your win :) ~*

Constance La France May 5, 2017 at 10:39 AM Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Ninette

Charlie Smith May 5, 2017 at 9:28 AM Terrific Luloo, congratulations.

Agnes Krampe May 5, 2017 at 8:29 AM Congrats on your win, luloo.

Jan Allison May 4, 2017 at 6:31 PM Luloo many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Joseph May May 4, 2017 at 4:46 PM Great write and win Laura

Alexis Y. May 4, 2017 at 3:11 PM Hi Laura, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Sara Chansarkar May 4, 2017 at 2:51 PM This is awesome,Laura!

Sandra Haight May 4, 2017 at 2:46 PM Yes, very powerful words in your creative Ninette, Laura. Congrats on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

John Michaels May 4, 2017 at 1:51 PM Powerful stuff, Laura! Congratulations on your First Place win! Regards, John.

White Wolf April 21, 2017 at 12:05 AM Dazzling dialect, Laura! Best of luck to you.

Poetprentice Dupins April 20, 2017 at 7:32 PM Yeah, that was dope! I must learn this form because it looks so cool and you made it cool as well with your poem.

Cyndi Macmillan April 20, 2017 at 5:24 PM I like this very much! "Stoic aftermath" is fresh and gritty. The contrast in blazed avalanche really works. Good stuff, Laura. Best wishes in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues April 20, 2017 at 3:07 PM Love this!