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Dazed and Numb

dazed- c a l l o u s and aloof from the stoic aftermath of your blazed avalanche- your ice has made me n u m b- Form N-Ninette Sponsor, Broken Wings April 20, 2017

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2017 4:21:00 PM

WELL DONE, Laura. Your theme was a bit like mine for "numb" I enjoyed seeing how you did yours as a ninette. Congrats.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2017 9:23:00 AM

Congratulations on placing first, Laura! Very poetically expressed emotions. Regards // paul

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/5/2017 11:52:00 PM

Big Congrats Laura to win top. Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 5/5/2017 4:15:00 PM

Huge impact on your poem Congratulations on your win :) ~*

Constance La France

Date: 5/5/2017 10:39:00 AM

Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Ninette

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/5/2017 9:28:00 AM

Terrific Luloo, congratulations.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 5/5/2017 8:29:00 AM

Congrats on your win, luloo.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2017 6:31:00 PM

Luloo many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 5/4/2017 4:46:00 PM

Great write and win Laura

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2017 3:11:00 PM

Hi Laura, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 5/4/2017 2:51:00 PM

This is awesome,Laura!

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/4/2017 2:46:00 PM

Yes, very powerful words in your creative Ninette, Laura. Congrats on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

John Michaels

Date: 5/4/2017 1:51:00 PM

Powerful stuff, Laura! Congratulations on your First Place win! Regards, John.

White Wolf

Date: 4/21/2017 12:05:00 AM

Dazzling dialect, Laura! Best of luck to you.

Poetprentice Dupins

Date: 4/20/2017 7:32:00 PM

Yeah, that was dope! I must learn this form because it looks so cool and you made it cool as well with your poem.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 4/20/2017 5:24:00 PM

I like this very much! "Stoic aftermath" is fresh and gritty. The contrast in blazed avalanche really works. Good stuff, Laura. Best wishes in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/20/2017 3:07:00 PM

Love this!