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Days Will Bide Their Time

The morn dawned gray, the fog crouched o'er the sea It spread across the land; on hill, in vale, it lay Obscured the rolling meadow, 'till arose a breeze As sun burned through the mist with slanting ray A thought did find its way into my mind That days will bide their time before they say Now look at us in all our finery designed To dazzle and delight, as -- our glory we unwind

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Date: 7/8/2019 11:06:00 PM
It sounds like this scene rolled out in a lovely way; and this type of poem has always delighted me. I never remember that it is a terza rima, but this time I wrote it down, determined to try one. Thanks for the education!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2019 8:47:00 AM
These terza rima's are a bit of challenge. Go for it, Caren! :) gw
Date: 7/8/2019 2:23:00 PM
a lovely observation, gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2019 2:50:00 PM
Thank you so much for this feedback. It is a delight! :) gw

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