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Days To Savor

J ust a lovely sunny day A nd I'm ambling along R iver flowing peacefully E very sound evokes a song D elightful is this day in May P retty blossoms everywhere I n my path and on the air C reatures peeking out at me K neeling some as if in prayer E ase of mind and body free T ucking memories away T o preserve a perfect day A ll the world is fresh and new C alling out the busy bees R obins picking at the ground O nly wind--a gentle breeze S pring is going much too fast T urning warmer every day I wish this lovely time could last C ould I but keep this lovely May. For Jared Pickett Acrostic2

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Date: 8/23/2010 6:03:00 AM
Hey, I never thought of myself as a beautiful spring day in May.... I must say, it is a breath of fresh air.... To bad this could not be posted because you may have found this ranked pretty high..... You touched my arrogance....... Good work my friend, good work..... Don't worry though keep an eye on my blog after I judge this contest because I will recognize it.......:JP}
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:07:00 PM
very nice!! reads easy--I love that!
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:06:00 PM
I would have liked to share this lovely day with you, Joyce. Best wishes for success in Jared's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:05:00 PM
You write it so well. Best wishes in the contest, a sure winner.
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