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"Dreams are a form of time travel without the jet lag"... Poet. On Christmas Eve, I dreamt of the days of my youth, back to when I'd toboggan down snow-covered hills. And ski, though I wasn't skilled, to tell the truth, but that was how we used to get our kicks and thrills. The fun of caroling or building a snowman was how we kept the Christmas spirit in our hearts. And yet, today, I am just another old man, an aged actor playing insignificant parts. I woke to a heavy blanket of sticky snow covering the city in a duvet of white. And though I'm old, I would very much like to go frolicking through the snow on this nostalgic night. Perfect for igloos, building forts, and snowball fights, I recall digging into snowdrifts ten feet tall. Once every house strung up colored Christmas lights, magic stirred the air and was felt by one and all. On Christmas Eve, I dreamt of the days of my youth, the fun of caroling or building a snowman. I woke to a heavy blanket of sticky snow, perfect for igloos, building forts, and snowball fights. (Rhyme) 12-02-2020 My Created Form Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 12/15/2020 4:07:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this wonderful poem, I like your image and your quote too _Constance
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Date: 12/15/2020 6:50:00 PM
Thanks Constance, my placement is greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/13/2020 3:24:00 PM
Hi Emile, The days of youth seems like a lifetime ago. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/13/2020 4:11:00 PM
Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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