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Days of Darkness

old weak-eyed heron dances around on one leg goes to bed hungry

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Date: 9/27/2022 11:52:00 AM
poor heron! Nicely done, but I feel his sad empty tummy!
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Date: 9/27/2022 7:17:00 AM
Great haiku Jeff.
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Date: 9/26/2022 4:18:00 PM
Poor heron needs a hero, somebody to throw him a fish!
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Date: 9/26/2022 9:04:00 AM
An apt brief token! Love it, Jeff!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 9/26/2022 9:42:00 AM
thanks, Kim, have a blessed day!

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