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Daytime Crystalline

Fat midnight bats feast, gnawing gnats, and flit away serene while on the trails in distant dales the lonesome wolverine sate appetites as dawn alights and daytime's crystalline. A migrant feeds on rotting seeds with fingers far from clean and thereby’s blessed with barren breast (the easier to wean) - her baby sucks an arid flux and fades away unseen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/3/2012 10:47:00 AM
Love the poem Well done
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Date: 8/27/2012 1:16:00 PM
Yep,yep...You should have kept going? I could have thrown a couple lines in there for ya to ponder...Ha,ha. Like the flow ~~~ :o)
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Date: 8/24/2012 2:35:00 PM
yes, I agree with harry - awesome. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )
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Date: 8/23/2012 7:38:00 AM
inspiring poem this Terry. awesome.
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Date: 8/22/2012 2:04:00 PM
Always something lovely from your pen Terry, love it - oxox // Anne-Lise
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Date: 8/22/2012 7:06:00 AM
loved the rhyme and flow it just show;s how talented you are thank you for sharing
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Date: 8/22/2012 5:16:00 AM
awesome imagery Terry sending chills up the spine to engulf this write.. luv the rhyme too..it adds flare to the tragedy luv..
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Date: 8/22/2012 5:06:00 AM
Terry I like this but, I feel there at least a couple moe stanza's......it has great flow....David
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Date: 8/22/2012 3:47:00 AM
Great poetry..love it! Jag
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