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Days In the Wilderness

Like all things, my days in this wilderness and all it 
encompasses will end. Until then, I choose to unburden my spirit;
I will love, cry, laugh and play as hard, long and as often as I can 
believing his word, light alone will comfort and lead me home.
~*~

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2013

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Sean L Sanders Date: 8/22/2013 12:56:00 PM Nicely said poet Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 8/10/2013 3:37:00 PM beautiful write Annalise....best wishes Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 8/8/2013 5:50:00 PM Annalise you have captured exactly how we should all wake and face each day...beautiful... Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/7/2013 4:49:00 PM I love this uplifting write, my friend. Congrats on your wins xx Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/7/2013 10:51:00 AM what a serene and joyful write, anne... i read and reread this to embrace its light.. how wonderful..:) hugggs Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 8/6/2013 10:13:00 AM Such a refreshing piece. So much truth to this. Wonderfully stated here! Login to Reply

Sean L Sanders Date: 8/5/2013 7:52:00 AM I like this poem, even though I hate religous poems but this is more spiritaul hopeful you are a very good poet.Excellent poem poet Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 8/4/2013 11:39:00 PM Excellent. Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 8/4/2013 5:25:00 PM As the "teach" says, "Beautiful and serene and full of hope" Great big hugs, Jack xoxox Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 8/6/2013 7:08:00 PM The "teach"... Eileen Ghali!

Russell Sivey Date: 8/4/2013 8:42:00 AM I like what Eileen said, I wish to echo that as well, especially the serene part! This is definitely a faith inspired write my friend! I really loved reading this tremendous poem this morning! What a lovely sentiment, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/4/2013 7:06:00 AM Beautiful and serene and full of hope....Lovely Login to Reply

Sue-Ellen Newman Date: 8/4/2013 6:10:00 AM Yes my friend His love and light will lead us home, though I stumble on his word of dwelling here but not partaking of worldly desires, needs and emotions, His love and light picks me up and leads me on, homeward bound I pray when I am done, enjoyed the read, blessings o you, sueellen Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/4/2013 5:58:00 AM spiritually beautiful Annalise nicely done Shadow x smiles Login to Reply

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/4/2013 5:43:00 AM Dear Annalise,I just thought I would stop by today and explore your new poems and I'm glad I did.Loved this one from you. Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 8/4/2013 3:01:00 AM I loved this entire poem but the third line especially...This reminds me a little of John the Baptist...'A voice crying in the wilderness'...Beautifully done my friend and have a very blessed Sunday - Tim Login to Reply