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Days End

an indian flute echoes across the valley as twilight decends creatures of the light now seek shelter for the night. a horned owl ascends the pace of life slows hunters of the night now roam looking for their prey the air fills with dew as moonlight peeks through the trees night's replaced the day

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Kash Poet

Date: 5/15/2012 9:44:00 PM

wonderful imagery in this poem.I can feel the calmness.Loved it.

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/15/2012 11:00:00 PM

Thank you so much Kash so kind of you to say. Have a blessed day. TLee

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/29/2012 7:53:00 AM

TLee, you have been where I live...lol...and heard me playing my flute out in the woods for the great owl who calls for his mate in the night....I love this girl!! makes me want to unwrap my flute and venture out into the woods again...Big Hugs, love~deb Well Done :)

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/29/2012 8:09:00 AM

I had soundscapes playing on my TV lastnight and a native american was playing a flute. There were birds calls in the background and my mind took off and this is where it went. Thanks for the kind review Huggs TLee

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 4/29/2012 5:59:00 AM

Ahh I can hear the sounds of flute and feel the descending night and howls of the creatures of the night, awesome, thank you for sharing Terry, Blessings, Bren

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/29/2012 6:05:00 AM

Hello so glad that you enjoyed my little piece. I bet you would get a kick out of a poem I have called Awe Shucks or even Vexation. I think you will find them a bit different. May someone spill laughter on your doorstep and it infect your whole day. TLee

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 4/29/2012 2:38:00 AM

Very well written dear,once again xoxoxo

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/29/2012 2:55:00 AM

Something clicked for me tonight as I popped out with 2 rather decent poems if I do say so myself. Thanks Elliott for your kind words . Have a wonderful day hon. Huggs TLee