Days Done

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All too often we get so caught up in the day we forget to slow down and appreciate all we have, we can't wait for the day to end then moan about the year going by too fast!

Days done!

The hours drift from morning to noon
They just seem to disappear
As you get on
Going about your business
Travelling to work
Or seeing to children
Caring for a loved one
Or working from home
The day just passes by
In a blink of an eye
Changing from day to night
As you wonder what
Tomorrow may bring
Yet not notice what
You did today
All you achieved 
Just gets tangled up 
Not even thought about
Lost in a blur
Whilst the hours tick by
You moan and groan
Wishing the day away
Can’t wait for it to end
That’s another day done
Where did it go?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/17/2015 2:30:00 AM
it went to the ally of our memories :)) nice one
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Gail Underwood
Date: 12/17/2015 7:13:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 12/16/2015 7:28:00 PM
I end every day with thoughts like these. Well written.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 12/17/2015 7:12:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 12/15/2015 8:46:00 AM
I wrote about time in 2011! 4 years ago! where did it go? I enjoyed this poem. Thank you. God Bless. D.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 12/16/2015 2:32:00 PM
Ive also wrote a poem on time! Thank you Dave
Date: 12/14/2015 6:10:00 PM
One day you're 5 the next you're 17 then 25, 35, 55, 65..time seems slow yet moves fast..like being inside a car traveling at 85, unless you look out the window it seems slow..time has no window just children that let you know how fast it moves as you watch them go from their birth to parent in the blink of an eye
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Gail Underwood
Date: 12/16/2015 2:31:00 PM
Very true, Thank you Frederic
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