Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

Days Bathed in Sunshine

 

Winter breath is its sequel
As pallid teardrops emulsify
Clearly, into ponds of dawn shining gleam
A dawn bird breaks the silence
Amid buzzing melodies
Fully flowing faith in feeler flowers.

Nature's warmth brings hues to life
Mixing shades for a kaleidoscope, 
ecstatic waltz,
luxuriant buds, luscious and enriched,
Sweet, perfumed threads of envy,
Softly whispered on a fresh breeze.

Meadows grew using earthly sources
Dreams that sustain life,
Restoring the essence of spring, resume.

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Silent One November 27, 2023 at 7:30 AM Awesome imagery with your choice of words to give depth and description to your poem.. They really brought it into life... The sun can really inspire so many people...

Abdullah Alhemaidy November 26, 2023 at 8:55 PM Very nice and beautiful smooth read! Have a beautiful day lovely Sotto ~ AA

Paige Hind November 26, 2023 at 8:21 PM Gorgeous poetry.... I could feel the sunshine bathed in all your metaphors and images.... just lovely!

Sara Kendrick November 26, 2023 at 10:00 AM Yes, I think we are already looking forward to those times of spring enjoyment that you have so aptly described. Winter is on its way, but it usually doesn't get too cold here or stay too cold very long at the time. Thanks for sharing this nice one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Ink Empress November 26, 2023 at 9:04 AM I always love reading how you weave free verse too, this is absolutely stunning with brilliant metaphors imagery and gorgeous alliterations, your wordplay and way of conveying thoughts is beyond impeccable. Especially love the lines “ Sweet, perfumed threads of envy, Softly whispered on a fresh breeze.” Something about the way you’ve delivered that really speaks volumes for me; and that ending is brilliant too. The way you’ve used nature here is captivating, as always a pleasure reading this