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Days Bathed in Sunshine

Winter breath is its sequel As pallid teardrops emulsify Clearly, into ponds of dawn shining gleam A dawn bird breaks the silence Amid buzzing melodies Fully flowing faith in feeler flowers. Nature's warmth brings hues to life Mixing shades for a kaleidoscope, ecstatic waltz, luxuriant buds, luscious and enriched, Sweet, perfumed threads of envy, Softly whispered on a fresh breeze. Meadows grew using earthly sources Dreams that sustain life, Restoring the essence of spring, resume.

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Silent One

Date: 11/27/2023 7:30:00 AM

Awesome imagery with your choice of words to give depth and description to your poem.. They really brought it into life... The sun can really inspire so many people...

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/26/2023 8:55:00 PM

Very nice and beautiful smooth read! Have a beautiful day lovely Sotto ~ AA

Paige Hind

Date: 11/26/2023 8:21:00 PM

Gorgeous poetry.... I could feel the sunshine bathed in all your metaphors and images.... just lovely!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/26/2023 2:39:00 PM

dearest Sotto-the way you used nature is truly captivating and spoke to my heart. Your alliterations and images were amazing...so succinct and softly beautiful. These words were among my favorites: "Nature's warmth brings hues to life Mixing shades for a kaleidoscope, ecstatic waltz." The kaleidoscope image is perfect! The last verse reminds that nature's cycles end but also bring new life. I am fond of the metaphorical message here...that we too have our seasons but can begin anew...faving!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2023 10:00:00 AM

Yes, I think we are already looking forward to those times of spring enjoyment that you have so aptly described. Winter is on its way, but it usually doesn't get too cold here or stay too cold very long at the time. Thanks for sharing this nice one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 11/26/2023 9:04:00 AM

I always love reading how you weave free verse too, this is absolutely stunning with brilliant metaphors imagery and gorgeous alliterations, your wordplay and way of conveying thoughts is beyond impeccable. Especially love the lines “ Sweet, perfumed threads of envy, Softly whispered on a fresh breeze.” Something about the way you’ve delivered that really speaks volumes for me; and that ending is brilliant too. The way you’ve used nature here is captivating, as always a pleasure reading this