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Days and Days of Rain

the fist, cottony-black clung madly to the revelation of blue sky, similar to the wizard of oz faking it behind the curtain days and days of rain — waterlogged puddles hypodermis of bark exposed looking like a tortured dog the woods haggard and gray the sentila-sun reveals a backroads lake yet perhaps on further study it is a road, so slick and wet the ting-a-ling of a wayward chime perhaps a summons to the deck the windows blink their eyes washed clean i throw my cerulean raincoat to the side “Hurray!” 1/4/2019

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Date: 1/4/2019 10:40:00 PM
A very well described poem of days a days of rain, we seem to be soaked along with everything else and long for the sun to shine again. Lovely poem, Poetry Hugs Kim, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2019 8:30:00 AM
Hugs to you, my friend! Finally seeing some sunshine today!
Date: 1/4/2019 9:54:00 PM
I like the personification of the windows, the woods, and the chimes. Nice one Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2019 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 1/4/2019 9:35:00 PM
I am seriously impressed by how this flows and the intricacy of your use of rhyme! Very well done, I am a better poet for having read this hehehe
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2019 9:37:00 PM
Thanjs, Kyle :)

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